Portent » data analysis http://www.eigene-homepage-erstellen.net Internet Marketing: SEO, PPC & Social - Seattle, WA Thu, 03 Sep 2015 18:20:24 +0000 en-US hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=4.3 How to Solve 6 Brutal Problems in Google Analytics http://www.eigene-homepage-erstellen.net/blog/analytics/how-to-solve-6-brutal-problems-in-google-analytics.htm http://www.eigene-homepage-erstellen.net/blog/analytics/how-to-solve-6-brutal-problems-in-google-analytics.htm#comments Thu, 16 Apr 2015 13:00:04 +0000 http://www.eigene-homepage-erstellen.net/?p=28050 Ever have one of those days where you’re digging through Google Analytics (GA) and you say to yourself “What the f*@$ is this s%$#!?!?” Yeah – me too. Don’t get me wrong – I love GA. It’s way easier to navigate than most of the other analytics platforms out there. But just like its users, GA… Read More

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Ever have one of those days where you’re digging through Google Analytics (GA) and you say to yourself “What the f*@$ is this s%$#!?!?”

Yeah – me too.

Don’t get me wrong – I love GA. It’s way easier to navigate than most of the other analytics platforms out there. But just like its users, GA isn’t perfect.

As an expert on both analytics and all things brutality (I’m a big death metal fan) I’d like to call out some of the most frustrating aspects of GA, as well as solutions to work around these obstacles.

NOTE: These brutal issues will be listed from the simplest to the most complex. If you’re new to GA, start reading here. If you’re a GA wizard, feel free to scroll down to more complex topics.

Problem: Limited visuals

When you present data you want your charts to look sparkly clean. GA’s basic visuals are fine, but when you try to show multiple metrics, segments, or time intervals…things get ugly:

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Looks more like a Richter scale than analytics data

Even with simple data points, the visuals in GA aren’t great:

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We want sexy data visualizations, not the bare minimum. The visuals can’t be customized within GA, so we have to look elsewhere for enhancing our charts.

Solution – Microsoft Excel

Export the data into a CSV in Excel to create your own visuals. Want to pick your favorite colors? Done! Want the labels to actually be readable from a distance? Done!

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If you’re lacking confidence in your Excel skills, check out my deck on visualizing analytics data in Excel. It’ll show you the basics on making kick-ass charts from your GA data.

Problem: Names of metrics and reports keep changing

One day you go into GA and try to look up how many unique visitors came to your site. But then you can’t find that metric, or other metrics, or even the Channels report where you looked yesterday.

Maybe you think you’re going crazy. It was all here yesterday!

You’re (probably) not crazy. GA decided to rename metrics and reports out of the blue. Now your unique visitors are called users, your visits are called sessions, and your Channels report is hidden under the All Traffic button. How dare they make you click one more button to find your report!

Solution: Search box

You can use the search box in the top left corner of the interface. If you need the Channels report, instead of clicking around the dropdown lists you can type it in the box:

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And select the report from the results:

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Note that you can also use this for finding recently viewed reports.

As for the renamed metrics, be on the lookout for announcements from GA when these changes occur. Here’s a quick list of common metrics from Google’s last renaming batch in 2014:

  • Visits are now Sessions
  • Visitors are now Users
  • Avg. Time on Site is now Avg. Session Duration

Problem: Data sampling

When you try to look at lots of data (like millions of sessions) with several dimensions and segments, eventually you’ll hit a data wall. GA will sample your report based on less than 100% of your sessions. It usually looks like this:

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This can be especially frustrating when you already clicked the button telling GA to provide your data with slower response for greater precision. Response time is exactly why the sampling occurs. GA doesn’t want to spend all day building out your report, so it provides a sample.

Solution(s):

  1. Purchase GA Premium to eliminate almost all sampling from your reports. You put down the cash and GA will work harder to bring you all of your data. But Premium costs $100,000+, so let’s assume that isn’t possible.
  2. Slim your report down to the essentials. Strip away extra segments and dimensions to obtain the largest sample possible.
  3. Worst case scenario – split the time interval into smaller parts and move the data into one Excel file. This is crazy annoying, but it technically works.

Problem: Traffic segments aren’t accessible in all reports

Custom segments are a fantastic way to view specific parts of your data. They’re easy to implement; click on the top ribbon, find (or create) the one you need, and you’re good to go!

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But if you venture to the Multi-Channel Funnels report, you’re screwed:

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Same goes for the Goal Funnel report:

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C’mon GA! What’s up with that?

Solution: Write Google an expletive-filled letter of complaint

I’m kidding of course. But you’d think by now this would be consistent across the entire interface. Until then we have to wait for the GA team to mercifully give us access to the segment ribbon on these reports.

Problem: Report filters lack “or” logic option

Let’s say you want to view all of your pages based around your site’s newsletter. The URLs contain either the word “mail” or “newsletter”. You can make a report filter to find URLs for mail, but when you want a filter to also capture newsletter…uh oh:

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We can only select “and”, meaning that the URLs would have to include both of those words. In this scenario the filters wouldn’t work.

Brutal.

Solution: Regular Expressions (RegEx)

This nifty language can help you access any combination of dimensions you’d want in a report. It even has a character that represents the word “or”, the vertical bar | (that’s not a lowercase L, or an uppercase i, but a vertical bar |).

If you select RegEx in the filter options, now we can create our filter with one condition:

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New to RegEx? No problem! Here’s a handy cheat sheet, as well as this free RegEx testing tool to verify whether or not your expressions are capturing what you need.

Problem: Multi-Channel Funnels revenue consistency to other reports

My colleague Michael Wiegand brought this one up. When you go to the Multi-Channel Funnels (MCF) report, direct traffic is awarded conversions differently than every other GA report. Google has their reasons but I’ll make it simple:

If a conversion takes place from a direct visit, in the MCF report the direct channel is awarded with the conversion. Every other GA report defers the conversion to the last non-direct visit from the user who just converted.

For example, here’s revenue in the Channels report:

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Then the same profile in the MCF report:

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They both add up to the same total revenue, but the distribution is inconsistent.

Some argue that this is more accurate since direct traffic is not ignored. But it creates an inconsistency when using multiple reports.

Solution: Less emphasis on last-click attribution

This brutal situation is an important lesson for all analytics users: last-click is not the only attribution model. Michael has an excellent post on the flaws viewing conversions with only last-click attribution.

Go play around in the Attribution Model Comparison tool to get more thorough insights on how your channels contribute to your conversions.

Next time you start to have a meltdown while in GA, just remember many issues on the platform have solutions. Even if there isn’t a current fix, Google updates the platform at least once per year to help solve these issues.

But don’t hesitate to take a screenshot of an issue and tweet them “WTF?” – they need the feedback.

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Data tells a story about the past, and helps us understand what we can expect in the future. But just like life, data has no guarantees. Even with all the data points and information in the world, it takes an experienced mind to transform insight into meaningful action.

Marketers need to fill the gap between the past and the future, and find those moments that capture the greatest number of conversions, conversations, and connections. This happens over, and over, and over again. Data, innovations, information – they’re only part of the story. Marketers must spin data into gold, and, as a recent PandoDaily story pointed out, not all marketers are capable of doing so.

PandoDaily calls attention to a recent Contently’s The State of Content Marketing Measurement report. Contently surveyed 302 marketers and found some depressing statistics: 91 percent of marketers surveyed were uncertain whether the content performance analytics they used were helpful.

That stings. For more than a decade, marketers have prided themselves on their data acumen. They’ve touted data as a way to prove ROI. This report shows that over 90 percent of marketers are unsure of data measuring one of the biggest marketing tools: Content. Unfortunately, we’re not surprised.

“Paralysis by analysis” is a fatal marketer disease. It’s a challenge we’ve all faced for years. It’s why so many companies build customer dashboards and analysis toolsets. All these new tools have yet to marry to strong interpretive techniques that clear away the data ‘cobwebs’ and get to what matters: the next action.

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How to write universe-conquering proposals http://www.eigene-homepage-erstellen.net/blog/random/great-proposals.htm http://www.eigene-homepage-erstellen.net/blog/random/great-proposals.htm#comments Tue, 06 Nov 2012 16:44:28 +0000 http://www.eigene-homepage-erstellen.net/?p=14188 AKA: ‘Because I said so’ doesn’t work This is a really long post. But before you TL;DR it, give it a quick skim. The first half is hand-waving stuff about answering ‘Why?’ The second half is specific tips on doing proposals that build imputed value. Writing a great proposal is hard. The question you’re trying… Read More

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AKA: ‘Because I said so’ doesn’t work

This is a really long post. But before you TL;DR it, give it a quick skim. The first half is hand-waving stuff about answering ‘Why?’ The second half is specific tips on doing proposals that build imputed value.

Writing a great proposal is hard. The question you’re trying to answer is “Why should I hire you?” But we spend a lot of time ducking and dodging around that question, instead. Typically, our proposals translate to ‘because I said so!’. Which really doesn’t work. So, I gave this presentation at Distilled’s most excellent SearchLove conference.

I use the learning from a fantastic book called Starting With Why, by Simon Sinek. I cite it a few more times. You should just go read it now.

Kids: Nature’s way of teaching us to write great proposals

My son turned 12 in March. He’s a great kid, but he’s definitely hitting the “Let’s see what makes dad produce that ‘grrrnnpphhhh’ sound he makes when someone cuts him off on the freeway” phase of his life.

Harrison’s growing realization that I’m a festering dolt has led him to use one word a lot, in a tone that indicates his complete, biologically-inspired scorn at how stupid I’ve become:

Me: Harrison, stop playing video games.
Harrison: Why?
Me: Because you need exercise.
Harrison: Why?
Me: Because otherwise you’ll turn into a hairless tribble.
Harrison: That’s dumb. Really, why?
Me: Because otherwise (sound of plug pulled from video game)
Harrison: DAAAADDDD!!!!

To be fair, I’ve only hit the plug-pulling stage once or twice. Like I said: He’s a good kid. Usually I take a bouncy detour straight to “BECAUSE I SAID SO!” which in my mind is actually “BECAUSE I F-G SAID SO!”

I tend to exaggerate (cough) so I though I should test just how bad the ‘why’ epidemic is in the Lurie household: I did a quick experiment this week. I told Harrison I’d pay him $5 if he could go an entire day without asking me ‘why?’ in response to a request. He made it 15 minutes.

With kids, we can occasionally get away with “because I said so”. Now and then, though, we have to do a really good job of answering ‘why’. Sometimes, “Because you’ll feel a lot better the rest of the day” works better than unplugging the video game

With potential clients or bosses, we can never, ever use Because I Said So. But we try it all the time.

I had this lesson pounded into me over 12 years of parenting and 17 years of proposal writing. You can take a shortcut: Read the rest of this post.

Stop playing it safe

Whether a potential client asks this question or not, when you write a proposal, you’re usually answering it:

If you’re working with an internal client at a big company, the question is something more like “Why should I do what you ask?” But the effective question is the same: “Why?”

They’re asking ‘why?’ and your first impulse is to write something like:

Because I said so

Luckily your brain intervenes and stops you. It says: I won’t be standing there when they read it. That’s true. So smart-assery probably isn’t a good idea. Unfortunately, your brain keeps going, and you think I’d better avoid anything that could be misinterpreted, and make sure I list every possible option.

So, you deliver a laundry list like this:

Throw it all in!!!!

Throw it all in!!!!

You answer with a babble of ‘how’, trying to bury the reader with information.

Sometimes, you answer with a weasel of ‘what’ instead: Something like “We’ll help you improve ROI.” Either one lumps you in with five other yawn-inspiring proposals. The client responds by skimming the first page or two, then skipping to bid.

Both of these answers equate to a shrug and “Because I said so.” You failed to answer the reader’s question, and guaranteed that she’ll remember you only for your estimate.

If you want to really learn the thinking behind ‘why’ versus ‘how/what’, then read a awesome book called Starting With Why, by Simon Sinek. Sinek dives deep into the subject—you’ll learn a lot of great stuff about successful leadership. Read it.

Because I Said So doesn’t create relationships

I’ve never had a great client relationship start with a client telling me “You had the longest list of services” or “You promised us the highest ROI” or (god forbid) “You were the cheapest.” Those are what and how issues.

I have had lots of great relationships start with “We really enjoyed talking to you!” or “We just felt like you get it.” That kind of connection happens when you answer Why.

Great, Ian. How do I answer ‘why’?

First, you need to understand why you do what you do. I find the easiest way to figure that out is to fill in the blank in this statement: “I run my business because I believe ______________.”

That’s should be the easy part (if it’s not, definitely read Sinek’s book). You have to explain that belief in the context of your potential client’s own beliefs. That’s a lot harder. My short cut is to fill in the blank in this statement:

If you ____ then we’re the agency for you.

Take my favorite TV show. If you asked the Eleventh Doctor for his Why, it’d be something like this:

Doctor Who's Why

It’s just true

Translate that to the viewer’s point of view, and he’d say something like:

Doctor Who's client why

It’s why I watch

I know: That’s fake. What about a real example? Here’s Portent’s Why:

We are in business because we believe that great marketing can save the world by connecting people to what matters.

And, here’s our proposal-friendly version:

If you think what you do matters, and want to work with folks who know that means it all matters, then we’re your agency.

Why is our value. It’s what we can bring to our clients. Not SEO. Not PPC. Not rankings or links or even ROI. Lots of folks can bring that. And, if the clients are nodding up and down when we talk about it, then we know we’ll work well together.

We can write this in our proposal, and/or say it when we meet with the potential client. But the real trick is making your proposal ooze this from every pore. It must be imputed.

The How must parallel the Why: Imputed value

Steve jobs believed in imputed value: The idea that customers should see, feel and know the Why not just because you say it, but also because everything about the product they have in their hands, or the ad they just saw, or the store they’re in is in sync with that ideal. In other words, the How must parallel the Why. Get those in sync and you’ll have a fantastic proposal.

The how should parallel the why

How Parallels Why? You win.

Your Answer must be implicit. If you say “If you want an agency that has an incredible attention to detail, we’re the agency for you” and then send a proposal filled with typos, your Answer is lost. If, on the other hand, you send an impeccable proposal document, then it’s easily imputed.

Building imputed value: Lots of little things

There are lots of little things, and some big ones, make an imputed Answer. Here are the ones I find are the most powerful done right, and worst when done wrong:

1: Change your frame of mind

The proposal you’re writing isn’t just about the text. It’s about imagery, typography and layout, too. Vomiting a bunch of words onto a page and e-mailing it off may be easier, but it also screams Because I Said So But if you’ve got a major potential client, or a really important project that has to get funded by your boss’s boss, you’ll have to answer the Why, and to do that, you need to go way beyond a glorified e-mail.

2: Pick your tools

I use Powerpoint or Apple Keynote to do my proposals. Other folks use Word or similar.Use what you find easiest. Clients seem to expect a slide deck, though, and I’ve found they’re a lot more comfortable with that format. Plus, I like the one-thought-per-page structure that slide software makes me use.

Apple Keynote

You may also need:

  • Your favorite fonts. I love Gotham, Myriad Pro, Minion and a few others. Unless you really know what you’re doing, don’t use more than two typefaces in one proposal.
  • A stock photo resource. See below for a warning about this. I like iStockPhoto.
  • A creative toolset: Adobe Illustrator, or something as simple as Comic Life (I love that program) to help you create callouts and such.
  • A screen capture and markup program. I use the built-in screen capture software on my trusty Macbook, plus Omnidazzle or Skitch depending on my mood.
  • A dictionary. Yes. A real dictionary. For, you know, spelling and definitions and stuff.
  • A simple image editor. I like Adobe Fireworks, which makes me a freak. Use Photoshop if you really want.

3: Start with the Why

Do start with your Answer: Whatever you used to fill in the blank.

Put it front and center. I like to start my proposals with something like this:

(I’ll explain the rat later on. Yes, we really do sometimes send proposals that are rodent-narrated.)

I adjust how I say it for different clients—I want them to understand it—but one way or another, the client hears that we take our work seriously.

That sets the tone for the rest of the proposal. Then I go into the standard stuff about how great we are, all our clients, etc. etc. That’s the What. It follows the Why.

4: Have a personality – writing

First and foremost: Write with personality. Write like you speak. I completely understand the fear that your tone might be off-putting. You could hide your tone behind acronyms and jargon. You could ‘speak executive.’ But can you do that for your entire relationship with the client? I doubt it. More important, will the reader even notice you among all the other jargon-ridden executive-speak proposals? Nope. This is one more instance of Because I said So.

Here’s an example I lifted from a proposal I wrote in 2002:

“Portent will conduct a three-week brand discovery, reviewing your customers, talking to your sales force and marketing team, and building a complete model for your brand…”

Does that actually say anything? Yes. It sounds like we’re going to put your company through a colonoscopy. It’s sure as heck not how I speak.

How about this, instead:

”…our team researches your target market and your online presence.”

That’s from a proposal written by Distilled. It brings tears to my eyes. So simple. And it reads so much more naturally.

It’s really hard to write just like you speak. You can use freewriting for practice. But I’ve never gotten to perfect, speech-like writing. Just aim for it. Abandon the corporate speak filter, unless that’s really how you talk in real life. I mean, someone must, right?

This may be the most important single tip in this entire post: If you can’t write like you talk, you’ll have a very hard time dealing with the ‘Why?’ and delivering your answer, because your proposal will lack authenticity. You’ll sound like another sales guy cranking out proposals. That’s not how you set yourself apart.

Also, check out Writing with Style by John Trimble. It’s filled with great tips for finding your natural writing voice.

5: Have a personality – imagery

A picture really is worth a thousand words. Check out how Distilled impressed Hipmonk:

Distilled Hipmunk

Gotta love these guys

They even got a puppy in there! While I’m not sure ‘cool’ is quite the right word (guys – you’re imitating a flying cartoon chipmunk), this image totally underlines Distilled’s Answer: “If you like to work with smart, creative people with a sense of humor who really love your brand, we’re the agency for you.”

Here’s how we do it at Portent. Our CCO long lacked a photo. I had some fun with it:

He's not really a meerkcat

Hey, he was a muskrat, first.

You don’t have to be funny, or silly. It just fits my particular personality and tone, so we run with it. Use what fits your approach.

6: Get to the point

Regardless of your audience, they’re short on time. Get to the point by:

  • Writing in active voice. Joe [verbed] the [noun]. Not The [noun] was [verbed] by Joe. And keep your dirty thoughts to yourself, thank you very much.
  • Avoiding word pads. The phrases you used to make your 240-word essay 300 words. Don’t use “went into” if “entered” will do. There are some great ones in the EU Internet Handbook
  • Avoiding empty phrases, aka ‘weasel words’. “A number of” is really just “many”, yes? You can get a decent list of empty phrases here, here and here.
  • Dumping the jargon. Try to avoid stuff like ‘ontology’ and ‘information retrieval’. It makes your audience’s eyes roll back in their head. Just a tip. Not that I’ve ever done that. Cough.
  • Clearly, some words are just worthless. Or should I say: Some words are worthless. See what I did there?

Unless you want to answer “Why should I hire you?” with “Because we’re really hard to understand and you’ll hate talking to us!” I recommend that you get to the point.

Again, I recommend reading John Trimble’s book, Writing with Style. And practicing a lot.

7: Illustrate whenever possible

Which would you rather see?

meh

meh

or this

Sooo much better

Sooo much better

The second one’s no work of art, but it’s a lot easier on the eyes, and it illustrates the point. You don’t even have to read the text if you don’t want to. The message is clear: We create reports that aren’t yanked out of Google Analytics.

Here’s how we talk about our process:

Our marketing process

That’s 5 or 6 pages worth of information, packaged up in a nice, easy-to-digest graphic.

Whenever possible, illustrate. Human beings process images more easily than words, no matter how nerdy we are. And, illustrations are a huge opportunity to strengthen your imputed Answer.

8: Avoid an assault

If you pour thousands of words into an endless document without a break, your reader’s going to cry surrender and head for the bid page again. You’re not connecting with them. You’re just bullying them with Because I Said So.

I like to use a large, readable font with wide line spacing, and minimal words per page:

What we'll do

Yes, that means more pages, but most folks will read these on-screen. So more pages > more words per page.

Try to use images, good typography and a little forethought to avoid a proposal that makes the reader’s eyes bleed. That’s never a good way to introduce yourself.

9: Make eye contact

When you use images with people or animals, use ones that look at the reader or at the subject of the page:

Eye contact!

Doesn’t that little guy tug at your heart strings?

When you write, make eye contact. Use ‘you’ not ‘the client’. And use ‘us’ instead of ‘you and whatever firm you work with’. It’s better for brevity and it tells me you’re speaking to me. It makes your proposal feel less like a template.

10: Choose stock photos wisely

Unless there’s a really good explanation, this image is pretty off-putting:

Uh, ok

Uh, ok

Sorry, but it’s just really hard to figure out how two snails making baby snails (or something) helps get any positive message across. Unless your proposal addresses a snail farm…?

Imagine reading through a proposal and happening on this little gem:

Yikes.

If you’re using stock photos, choose carefully. Go with images that fit your Answer. Or at least images that don’t pick up your Answer, shred it, stomp on it, then dump it in a garbage disposal.

11: Don’t use bare stock photos

I got a proposal a week ago that had this image on the cover:

Such happy, shiny people

My god, I thought. Look at all these happy attractive people. This company must really have their poo together. I guess we’ll be their token ugly client.

Then I did a quick reverse image search:

Such shiny, happy fakery

Nothing says ‘I’m a tool’ like a slapped-together proposal bookended by stock photos you’re passing off as your team.

Don’t use bare stock photos. If you’re going to use stock images, use them as they’re meant to be used: As raw material for something else.

Unless, of course, you want your Answer to be “If you want to work with a company that hasn’t had an original idea since we opened, we’re the agency for you.”

12: Use data sparingly (and well)

Don’t bury your reader in data. I once sent a potential client a 45-page proposal that included a complete review of their online revenue sources, one by one. I also sent someone this gem:

data vomit

Painful. I can practically hear them: “OH GOD MY EYES MY EYES I CAN’T SEE WHAT HAPPENED IAN FRIED MY VISUAL BRAIN CENTERS WHAT A BUTTHEAD.” Don’t wear data like a sequined disco suit. You’re not impressing anyone. And, it’s just another way of saying Because I Said So.

Follow principles of good data presentation. Use data to support case studies, or to show opportunity:

Always give good data

Always give good data

But use it sparingly, and well. Ask yourself: Will using this data reinforce why the reader should hire us? If the data is just going to answer what you’ll do, or how you’ll do it, think twice. If it’ll answer why, as well, then use it.

13. Be consistent

If you use a program like Powerpoint to do your proposal, make sure you use a consistent layout. Don’t have page headings and images jumping around like they’re in an early-20th-century silent film. It’s not artistic. It’s just annoying.

If you’re using a word processor, make sure fonts, line spacing, etc. stay the same from page to page.

In both cases, apply formatting rules consistently. And use consistent naming conventions.

I know: “Ian, no one notices this stuff.”

True. They don’t notice it. They just find your proposal a little bit harder to read, or not quite what they wanted.

Imputed. Value. Make sure you’re consistent.

14: Think about typography

Think a lot about typography. Your proposal’s largely words. Making those words easier to read makes it a lot more inviting:

  • Set leading (line spacing) so that your pages don’t look crowded. I like to use 1-to-1 line spacing in proposals: I use the same line height as my font size.
  • Set paragraph spacing so there’s at least 50% more room between paragraphs as between lines.
  • Pick a typeface that’s easy to read and fits your personality as a company. San-serif is very direct and no-nonsense. Serif is sophisticated and creative. That’s a huge generalization, though. Use your judgment.
  • Space bullets, numbered lists, etc. so they’re readable.
  • Use left-justified for left-to-right languages. Do not use full justification! It’s a pain to read.

Which would you rather read?

or

The first version is Powerpoint’s default settings. The second uses a wider leading and better paragraph spacing. Little things make a big difference.

For a humungous list of resources, check out Vandelay Design’s 101 Typography Resources for Web Designers. For quick overview, read The Top 10 Typography Rules
by Webitect.

15: Use PDF!

Finally, no matter how simple your layout, no matter how ‘safe’ you think you are, send your potential client/boss the PDF (Portable Document Format) version of the proposal. If you put in tons of great work and create something like this:

Pretty, PDF version of your proposal

Pretty, PDF version of your proposal

But the client, or your boss, opens it and it looks like this:

Nooooo! What happened to my beautiful proposal?!

Nooooo! What happened to my beautiful proposal?!

…you may have lost your chance.

PDF packages up fonts, images, etc. and ensures the document will look the same to the reader as it does to you. It’d be a shame to put all that work into your proposal, only to have the whole effect ruined because the reader doesn’t have the Gotham font on their laptop…

Little things, done right

If you want to write a winning proposal, you have to address the ‘Why?’ before you do anything else. That’s how you set yourself apart. That’s how you get in the door to talk about the What and the How.

Part of this process is explicit: You need to tell the reader the answer to ‘Why should I hire you?’ or ‘Why should I approve this project?’ Talking about specific services (the how), pricing (the how) or ROI (the what) won’t work. You have to appeal at a more basic, emotional level by tying your company’s value and motivation directly to the kind of work you’ll do for the client. That’s the ‘Why?’

And, while part of answering ‘Why?’ is explicit, a lot of it’s imputed. You reinforce your message by handling all the details, from typography to imagery to writing style. As Renny Gleeson says, little things, done right, matter.

And, I’d suggest that this is about a lot more than proposals. This is about your next report; your meeting w/ your boss; great outreach. Know why you do it. Make it work through ‘how’ you do it.

Oh, and here are the slides from the presentation:

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Data That Persuades: My SES presentation, with notes http://www.eigene-homepage-erstellen.net/blog/analytics/data-that-persuades-my-ses-presentation-with-notes.htm http://www.eigene-homepage-erstellen.net/blog/analytics/data-that-persuades-my-ses-presentation-with-notes.htm#comments Fri, 17 Aug 2012 23:17:37 +0000 http://www.eigene-homepage-erstellen.net/?p=11246 I gave a talk titled Data That Persuades at SES San Francisco yesterday. I’d like to say it was a fantastic home run, but I was bleary-eyed and out of it, and I think some of my points didn’t totally get across. So, I just finished an annotated version: All my slides, with notes explaining… Read More

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I gave a talk titled Data That Persuades at SES San Francisco yesterday. I’d like to say it was a fantastic home run, but I was bleary-eyed and out of it, and I think some of my points didn’t totally get across. So, I just finished an annotated version: All my slides, with notes explaining what’s going on:

Enjoy!

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